you wish

The concept is seen but the mixed high ley/bw realization and depth and contrast of black and white made it a strong and really good seeing image.
I liked the idea of decentrate the hat off of the mediane line of the body, gives more personality to the composition, as the well defined lines of lips and hair on the right of the frame.
Maybe if you put a little more far from background and didn't pinch right breast so much could be better, but this is just my opinion.
I like this shoot, really much.

Just my 2 cents

Stefano Kaluza