Both the first and second photo is interesting. But I think I prefer the left one. It captures the beauty of the mode, she has a very nice face profile. The hair is perfectly arranged, the pose and the contrasts are good too. From the left to right – dark hair, a light face, a dark background, a light arm and once again dark background. It reminds me of a stripe-pattern shirt. As for the other photo the idea of getting closer to the model is nice, but the way the hand is cut off affects the photo in a very negative way. The hand looks like it was broken in 3 places, due to the close-ups of the skin and the borders of the photo. The black and white is perfect, but the grays have unfortunately turned into strips of pixels.
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