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Submitted: May 13, 2011
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Make:NIKON CORPORATION
Model:NIKON D700
Shutter Speed:10/4000 second
Aperture:F/3.2
Focal Length:85 mm
ISO Speed:200
Date Taken:May 12, 2011, 3:54:49 PM
Software:Adobe Photoshop CS2 Windows

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to the heaven we shall riseby ~zenibyfajnie

Photography / People & Portraits / Self-Portraits

Critique by ~Kokandy Mar 26, 2012, 3:15:52 AM

The setting is absolutely great. I love the blurred background and how you involved the boat in the picture.
You relaxed look & position let you standing seem to be totally easy, although I could imagine it needs at least a bit feeling for balance ^^

The colours of your clothes match your surrounding: They are different enough to be recongnized in this background, but not to bright/extraordinary that they would disturbe the atmosphere of the picture.
(wearing Chucks gives an extra plus from me

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Only your facial expression looks a bit to strict in my oppinion.
I also think it would be possible to discuss about your hair and how it fits into the photo. For me it is a great accent to focus the viewers attention on you *thumbs up*

So...a VERY nice work, like everything in your gallery.
Keep going!

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~spirit-guard-leo Apr 18, 2013 Hobbyist Artist

Wow I just realized that you are great at balancing

~5minutzzycia Jan 22, 2013

Masz za każdym razem idealny klimat zdjęć, nie do skopiowania. Lubię czasem sobie poprzeglądać trochę Twoich fotek

Jestem ciekawa następnych pomysłów ! ;D

~2dillydally May 21, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

I really like the scenery and overall view I see here - in this one I don't think anything more can be added and nothing don't need to be taken away as well.
Maybe facial expression is a little too hard and unemotional however in this case it doesn't change anything as it is such a small part of the picture it self.