this brings to mind the earlier work you did in a similar setting with the stags skull & antlers...if so beautiful for the way it embodies renewal and transformation...your poise looks like the stag exudes as much confidence in this expression of it's virility through you as it might of in it's previous incarnation. the location for such a picture was very nicely chosen...it sets up the path of travel excellently for the stag after leaping down from the other side into the stream...running through the living waters of renewal and the making it up the embankment on the new side of the stream with a magnificent leap...all while you embody the constant movement of the stag in a trotting forward movement while holding a nirvanic look.
in the dark, dark forest of your unconscious mind on the other side of the garden that you most often walk through but hardly enter...or something like that, right?
Much better! I love the model's expression, being "Look at me. I am strong and rebellious.". Her hair, beautifully done and very bright, catching my attention. Again, perfect Oscar Wilde shirt, cos she is a rebellious Catholic School Girl and she will rule. And she looks like she can kick ass. But she also looks graceful. Her pose is very, unique. She can balance on one foot in those cute heels.
The scenery is so mysterious and indeed, a dark, dark forest. The river on the side is so cool and makes it look like she is going on a stroll in the forest and she is not going to be messed with.
Originality? Need I go on? It's original. COMPLETELY/ Vision on her face is a little blurry but it doesn't really affect the photograph. Overall, perfect. Just fix the blur
Yet again, much like most to all of the other deviations you have posted on here, you have again done something completely artistic and gotten way too much attention for it.
I'm jealous of your camera. But your picture-taking skills are horrible.
the location for such a picture was very nicely chosen...it sets up the path of travel excellently for the stag after leaping down from the other side into the stream...running through the living waters of renewal and the making it up the embankment on the new side of the stream with a magnificent leap...all while you embody the constant movement of the stag in a trotting forward movement while holding a nirvanic look.
in the dark, dark forest of your unconscious mind on the other side of the garden that you most often walk through but hardly enter...or something like that, right?
Again, perfect Oscar Wilde shirt, cos she is a rebellious Catholic School Girl and she will rule. And she looks like she can kick ass.
But she also looks graceful. Her pose is very, unique. She can balance on one foot in those cute heels.
The scenery is so mysterious and indeed, a dark, dark forest. The river on the side is so cool and makes it look like she is going on a stroll in the forest and she is not going to be messed with.
Originality? Need I go on? It's original. COMPLETELY/
Vision on her face is a little blurry but it doesn't really affect the photograph.
Overall, perfect. Just fix the blur
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