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:icontom46:
Dear Zeny,I am on the 3º year of highschool and in the class we learn that the photographies have got a lot of science,you don't need to get naked,a photo can be really cool whitout that.
BUT IT YOU DO IT DO IT RIGHT AND DON'T GET OUT OF THE FOCUS.
Weeeell... i must to complete 100 words to the critique would be valid,so I will tell you how I put the stars.
Vision:
the thing that we want to see is out of the focus (and don't say that we should see your face,if you're naked,we wouldn't want to look at your face....sorry :/).
Originality:
The flowers and you so white make you look like and angel,and that is not what i use to think when I see a naked women,so that's it's good.
Technique:
Weeell...You do what you want to do whit getting out of the focus your body,so that ain't a mistake,but ain't nothing out of the world,so I put 3.5 stars.
Impact:
This photo impact,and a lot.
I hope you read this,would be a pleasure recieve a answer from you,and sorry if my english is bad,I'm spanish.
What do you think?
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:iconnuddie69:
Nuddie69 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015
Beautiful point of view ;)
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:iconpainkiller3333:
painkiller3333 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015
Bardzo fajne zdjęcie. No i świetna modelka ;p
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:icongrixpix:
grixpix Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
fantastik !!
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:icondaver66-69:
daVer66-69 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I disagree with that. the defocused area looks just fine
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:iconmoonray1033:
MoonRay1033 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Simply wonderful!
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:iconnevermorejt:
NevermoreJT Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
Beautiful
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:iconerrolw98:
errolw98 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I Love This One.
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:icondemosthenes1blackops:
demosthenes1blackops Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
how did you get this depth of field effect?
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:iconmartin222:
martin222 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012
U're just sublime !
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:icongingerjem:
gInGeRjEm Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
i like it so much...
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:iconjennifermulkerrin:
JenniferMulkerrin Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012  Professional Photographer
this is beautiful!
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:icondannysulca:
dannysulca Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Student General Artist
so beautiful...
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:icongresmith:
gresmith Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012
Nice *.*!!
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:icondjbig:
DJBIG Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
This is such an intriguing photo. Whoever thought this design up, you or the photographer or whoever, it's really cool.
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:iconlethiel:
Lethiel Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Professional Photographer
hi ! Your wonderful work has been Featured here: [link] :highfive:

Pozdrawiam Serdecznie :love:
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:icongfdedicatedaccount:
gfdedicatedaccount Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Student Photographer
Awesome !
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:iconrednose2:
RedNosE2 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Very nice!
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:iconnosredna1313:
nosredna1313 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Don't remember faving this... but I can see why I did. Awesome.
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:iconblueiboy:
blueiboy Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
im in love...im dans l'amour...l'im nell'amore...im in Liebe.....Im w miłośc.....влюбленный im...

sometimes words are just not enough.......
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:iconbebelatte:
bebelatte Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
Beautiful! but i lost your face when it wasn't focused, your hair already pops out so no need to focus there. still, you are beautiful as always mah lady!
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:iconnesempai:
NeSempai Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
The skin palor sets off the bright hair, lips and nails SO well, I love the minimal accessories too so it isn't too busy.
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:icontartaritantana:
Tartaritantana Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Student General Artist
morning...skin's crawling...
Pure Morning ~ Placebo
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:icontartaritantana:
Tartaritantana Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Student General Artist
morning...skin's crawling...
Pure Morning ~ Placebo
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:iconinstantshame:
Instantshame Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011
I love how it is all there... BUT NOT THERE... classy ... very!
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:iconrojpix:
Rojpix Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011
excellent use of dof again.. and yeah the bokeh is subtle but strong
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:iconrojpix:
Rojpix Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011
excellent use of dof .. most clever
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:iconfraggleman:
fraggleman Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
i love the shock of color your hair brings to this photo! The DOF really makes it more sensual and emotive.

really great work! :)
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:iconjoergjohannmueller:
JoergJohannMueller Featured By Owner May 20, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful done. So lovely. The colors are amazing!
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:icondirtyvonp:
DirtyVonP Featured By Owner May 19, 2011
nice pose nice shot great work
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:icondeadavalanche:
deadavalanche Featured By Owner May 12, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Beautiful colors and I love the range of focus.
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:iconcg-shell:
cg-shell Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Sublime focal length and composition :)
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:iconemma-jen:
Emma-Jen Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
this is absolutely beautiful, your photographs are so breath-taking! <33
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:iconch0rch3:
ch0rch3 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011
nice bokeh, vary good :)
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:iconacousticblues:
acousticblues Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2011
I love this shot. It is so beautiful that it left me speechless. :-) (and that is rare!) ;-)
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:iconwillyart:
willyart Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
Great use of selective focus, wonderful tonal range and pose...
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:iconstiggs2231:
stiggs2231 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010
awsome
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:iconmoonshalo:
MoonsHalo Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
I'm lost for words. What a fantastic shot.
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:iconeisenaugen:
eisenaugen Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2010
your photography is truly inspired
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:iconphotogrartist:
Photogrartist Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2010  Professional Photographer
Excellent use of shallow depth of field; getting this right so that your face was in focus must have taken a few tries.
Kudos.
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:icononlyforgame:
onlyforgame Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
very good play with focus, nice pose...
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:iconconan2553:
conan2553 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010
I see what you're trying to do but its hard to find the focal point in this picture.
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:iconstevewackenking:
SteveWackenKing Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
:heart:
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:iconlondar13:
Londar13 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010
Perfect!
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:iconubermenschuzot:
UbermenschUzot Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2010
amazing work!^^
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:iconfruehlingskind:
Fruehlingskind Featured By Owner May 26, 2010
Personally, I don't like the combination of your orange hair and the pink nails/lips. But I like the pose a lot! Great one!
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:iconsgt-kanada:
sgt-kanada Featured By Owner May 25, 2010
Very stunning shot. I love the way its foreshortened and how it fades out of focus the farther away from the face it gets. :D
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:iconqualityofsilence:
Qualityofsilence Featured By Owner May 24, 2010
haha ha&mowa opaska na ręce, mam taka samą ;d
przerażają mnie twoje zdjecia
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:icondevineworrior:
devineworrior Featured By Owner May 23, 2010
Very sexy but very beautiful at the same time.
Pure is something untouched but blessed upon as well.
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:iconmrmd53:
mrmd53 Featured By Owner May 14, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Great work! :rose:
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:iconlexxii:
lexxii Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Excellent
:)
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