I don't have time to do a critique, but here's a suggestion: The balance feels off. From the bottom left, go up the distance to that small mole, then go up that distance again. Crop the image there. That "empty" area at the bottom provides the necessary reference contrast to make the top half so wonderfully striking - you just don't need quite so much of it.
this is an amazing image, id get this as a wall print if I werent broke, and of course with your permission. As others said, great contrasting, your eyes are a perfect match for your hair, strikingly beautiful woman!