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February 8, 2012
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o kruku by zenibyfajnie o kruku by zenibyfajnie
Rozmowy.

1/3 cyklu. Takie tam.
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:iconalxbrg:
no boobs = no critiques? Haha, I'll write you one, because this deserves it.

Vision and originality:
Interesting vision and concept, although without context it is a bit hard to judge. Definitely original!

Technique:
Very good! I'm especially fond of nr 3 & 4 of the top, and nr 1, 4, 5 on the bottom row. Simple, but at the same time strong forms, confident strokes.
(A small nitpick: while all the others apparently shows Ravens [Corvus corax], nr 3 on the top row actually looks much more like a rook [Corvus frugilegus]! And as I understand "Kruku" is Polish for Raven)
I am less fond of nr 2 & 5 on the top, and nr3 on the bottom. they dont have the same confidence and strength, and detracts somewhat from the overall impact of the piece.
The ripped newspaper pages gives something of a human touch and context to it, and without it this would be "just" a nice series of well painted Ravens (and a Rook). The newspaper makes me think that you wanted to say something, make a comment or make the viewer reflect and think about their reaction to different picture-boxes.
But overall very good, the technique is the strongest aspect of this piece in my view.

Composition and colour:
The amount of individual "boxes" makes it a bit messy and unfocused, it takes too long to take in the whole piece, and sadly lessens the impact. Maybe having just 4 or at the most 6 different boxes (of which I personally would like nr 4 top, and 1, 4, 5 bottom ;) to give a much more powerful design and impact. Less is more :)

Colour wise its excellent! The old yellow stained newspaper backdrop contrasts very nice with the muted blues and greys.

Impact:
The bold, simple black shapes that are well executed gives a strong impact. But the small size of the image file (maybe it looks much better at a larger size?) and the amount of "boxes" lessens the impact. In my humble opinion it would be better off with fewer boxes and at a larger file size.

Comments:
Not much more I can say, very good, just a few minor things that I personally think would improve it. The colour, composition, technique and execution shows real effort, thought and skill.
Well done!
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:iconrobjoeball1:
robjoeball1 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012
I love the raven!
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:iconpoopdc:
poopDC Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
these are beautiful!!!!
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:icontawmn:
tawmn Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
amazing!
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:iconniewy3mam:
niewy3mam Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012
wypas
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:iconflacidomingo:
flacidomingo Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
excellent!
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:icondrejay:
DreJay Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Gorgeous :}
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:iconarusung:
AruSung Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012   Photographer
I like it
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:iconhaplotype:
Haplotype Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
simple and eligant
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:iconxdelisabeth69:
XDElisabeth69 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
its pretty cool!
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:iconaemarsfan:
aemarsfan Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
Cool!
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:iconwahhaab:
Wahhaab Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
W cyklu nastepne szczury?
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:iconzenibyfajnie:
zenibyfajnie Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
pf... zgadło Ci się. Nie w cyklu, ale mam pracę ze szczurami :>
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:iconwahhaab:
Wahhaab Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
To nie bylo zgadywanie, jezeli bylem pewien. Oczywiscie, ze masz :{>
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:iconzenibyfajnie:
zenibyfajnie Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
bezczelny jesteś z tą emotą, bezczelny :>
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:iconwahhaab:
Wahhaab Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
Ha! :{D
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:iconjack-o-lantern:
Jack-O-Lantern Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Fajne, fajne.
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:iconfoenix-fantasy:
Foenix-Fantasy Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Gorgeous :)
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:iconrobrokop:
robrokop Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
definitley more of this
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:iconkharcix:
kharcix Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Miła odskocznia. Pokusiłabym się nawet o stwierdzenie, że częściej mogłabyś takie pracki wrzucać. Tusz czy akwarele?
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:iconzenibyfajnie:
zenibyfajnie Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
tusz :heart:
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:iconkharcix:
kharcix Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bosko! Proszę o więcej :D
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:iconodcinki:
odcinki Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Professional Writer
Ty robisz takie rzeczy? Daaamn.
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:iconzenibyfajnie:
zenibyfajnie Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
zdarza mi się : ) ale jak pewnie wiesz doskonale, jest to o wiele trudniejsze i bardziej absorbujące niż fotki, więc ograniczam się do realizowania zaliczeń. Pki co mam ostatni semestr i temat własny, więc chce zaszaleć.
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:iconodcinki:
odcinki Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Professional Writer
Czy ja wiem czy fotki to taka prosta sprawa. Raczej nie :D
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Chaosfive-55 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:icontheravenplz:
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:icondemosthenes1blackops:
demosthenes1blackops Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
the crows are well-rendered in an effective style.
beyond that, I can offer no useful criticism - I suspect I am missing a necessary understanding of the news text.
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RyuseiTFS Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
So in first row it's "money greed" (greed is cut), and first pic in second says "talk about freedom" (talk is cut).

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A co do pracy to świetna!
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:icondemosthenes1blackops:
demosthenes1blackops Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks!
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:iconkruky13:
kruky13 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012
fajne
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