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Submitted: January 19, 2012
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Make:NIKON CORPORATION
Model:NIKON D700
Shutter Speed:10/1250 second
Aperture:F/2.0
Focal Length:85 mm
ISO Speed:1000
Date Taken:Jan 15, 2012, 3:20:20 PM
Software:Adobe Photoshop CS2 Windows

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Critique by ~totalfacefuck Feb 28, 2012, 2:41:57 AM

The photo is much too grainy, the edges of the thighs are so unclear they seem blurry, too much shadow on the eyes. Also, the hair is overexposed.
The heater on the right ruins the photo slightly, also the texture of the bedspread isn't exactly the most arousing, it looks like a towel.
If the second foot was in focus as well as the one in front, that would be great - perhaps a larger focus depth and then a blur edit to things that should be in the background would look better,
Other than that, the photograph has potential to be amazing, the model is super attractive, so is the position she is in and the light is lovely. Not the best edit and background composition.

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Critique by ~gothafro Jan 30, 2012, 4:38:08 PM

ok first its a great way she mixes brights and darks.now the way she uses light to acomppany her bright hair color and her bright shoes with the sparkels.also with the way she wears little clothing shows us that she knows what she is doing.now i love what you have done in this one the placement could have been better and a maybe a purple or blue shirt would have been a better choice but im not going to tell you its bad dont get me wrong its a good picture but maybe with a dimmer room it would look a little better.

p.s. i love your hair