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Julia & Martyna.
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First off I would like to say that I LOVE the photos that you take! They are visually stunning and just all around amazing! :dummy:

This picture caught my eye the second I passed it when I was going through your gallery. The first thing I would like to start on is the make up on the model. It. Is. Perfect. For this shot. Usually I find makeup to be distracting or a little too much but that is exactly what the model needed to just really give this picture that extra oomph and take it towards extraordinary !

Another thing I would like to touch on is the the lighting on the model. It touches all the right parts of her body to make it alluring and coupled with the smoke adds a touch of mystery and wonder! At first I thought maybe the smoke was too thick but then it kind of grew on me.

I left the score a little shy on technique simply because I wish there was a little more detail shown on the upper part of the other body. Just a little. But the smoke sort of takes away from that. That is by no means really your fault, I would be amazed if you could control smoke :wink: But I think a little more contrast between the model and the background would help this picture. Just a slight slight slight darkening of the background.

All in all this is a FANTASTIC photo! Good job :) :iconnewglomp:
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deadcancoil Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012
JohnBowden Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
Ryan-Bater Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
I drooled.
RejeanBrandt Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Professional Photographer
Stunning, beautiful, unique, remarkable, original.... and I could keep going. Instant fav!
Mitia-Arcturus Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011
Dear zenibyfajnie
Your work is selected to get in
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become ART-PORTRAITS's member you are welcome!!! ...:heart:
cayterr Featured By Owner May 14, 2011
Hogart1960 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Professional General Artist
Wow, nicely done. This is the second photo I have seen of yours that hit the mark.
shaghayeghfantasy Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
MalyszKZ Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011
Cudownie wykonane zdjęcie
Yorge Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
great image
luciledizier Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Student Photographer
God, if I could talk really good english, I would give you a nice critique... but I don't so, let's just say it's wonderful !
gokhanproject Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
wonderful work.
twelve8teen Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011
I love the amount of smoke in the photo, almost makes it look like she came out of it. Love the subtle make up aside from the winged eye. Really great work
tempy666 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010
omg amazing
imaginary-whisper Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2010  Student Photographer
i love the smoke and how she looks like shes diffusing
EndlesSstyle Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010
Unbelievably terrific .. :O
taki1 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2010
MedaGritzko Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Magical photo!
theEinME Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2010  Student Photographer
wow, great atmosphere, i loved it
LexDiana Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
spamwisegamgee Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2010
Wow! It almost looks like a drawing. This is cooool
cruiser101 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2010
Ja tam moze amator jestem ale mnie sie BARDZO to zdjecie podoba :)
"Duszny klimat" estetyka, swiatlo... WSZYSTKO.
fiercebloodlove Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2010
This is really beautiful, the structure of her face is just lovely. The tones are perfect, though I would have liked to see the reflection of her face as well, just lightly.
SteflynPhotography Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
First off al, this is realy stunning!
I love the way the smoke fade away on the left side off her face. And al the details you can see.
Also her make up is realy beautiful and her collarbones are also beautiful.
-Amazing job :clap:
JayRoseberry Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010  Student General Artist
i love the smoke coming off her face its intense!
livinhaz Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010
i dont think it's over. it's more than perfect and maybe a lot of smoke can have a different meaning than 'the right amount of smoke'. it's perfect. def a fave.
MissHakio Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010
very nice! congrats :)
Neva-Jean Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010
this is
awesome work...
CDPSolid Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010
Wow ! I'm working on one some what like this. Mine she has a smoke in her hand. Very good detail with the whole subject. Love the details in the collar bone and face . . . Great job !
FrancoisDeWynter Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010
very nice
chriseastmids Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
i think this is excellent ... i love the smoke it really ads something wonderful to this piece :hug:
Lcharyzma Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Już miałem zadać pytanie: gdzie jest ta 2ga dziewczyna, bo jej nie początkowo zauważyłem ;D Więc zgadzam się z poprzednikami, że dym jest troszkę za gęsty. Ale w sumie może, teraz klimat fotki jest lepszy ;)
monochromatic13 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I think the smoke is a little heavy and it is starting to take away from the overall quality of the photograph.

With that said, pictures with smoke, mirrors, and black and white are very good photos. Yours is fantastic, but its like makeup; when there is too much, there has to be something wrong with whats under it, right?
3dArt-APO Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010
Good Detail in the Darks and lights - I agree with the smoke being a bit heavy. Not something that is easy to control. Good composition - good texture to the photo, good ambient lighting.
Tronyx Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010
WOW! This us such a fantastic shot!
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