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changes come by zenibyfajnie changes come by zenibyfajnie
Julia & Martyna.
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:iconmomonifeliyador:
First off I would like to say that I LOVE the photos that you take! They are visually stunning and just all around amazing! :dummy:

This picture caught my eye the second I passed it when I was going through your gallery. The first thing I would like to start on is the make up on the model. It. Is. Perfect. For this shot. Usually I find makeup to be distracting or a little too much but that is exactly what the model needed to just really give this picture that extra oomph and take it towards extraordinary !

Another thing I would like to touch on is the the lighting on the model. It touches all the right parts of her body to make it alluring and coupled with the smoke adds a touch of mystery and wonder! At first I thought maybe the smoke was too thick but then it kind of grew on me.

I left the score a little shy on technique simply because I wish there was a little more detail shown on the upper part of the other body. Just a little. But the smoke sort of takes away from that. That is by no means really your fault, I would be amazed if you could control smoke :wink: But I think a little more contrast between the model and the background would help this picture. Just a slight slight slight darkening of the background.

All in all this is a FANTASTIC photo! Good job :) :iconnewglomp:
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deadcancoil Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012
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JohnBowden Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
Fantastic!
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Ryan-Bater Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
I drooled.
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RejeanBrandt Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2011  Professional Photographer
Stunning, beautiful, unique, remarkable, original.... and I could keep going. Instant fav!
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Mitia-Arcturus Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011
Dear zenibyfajnie
Your work is selected to get in
:iconart-portraits: ...and...:iconaction-portraits:
become ART-PORTRAITS's member you are welcome!!! ...:heart:
regards
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cayterr Featured By Owner May 14, 2011
WOW
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Hogart1960 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Professional General Artist
Wow, nicely done. This is the second photo I have seen of yours that hit the mark.
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shaghayeghfantasy Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
woOoOow
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MalyszKZ Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2011
Cudownie wykonane zdjęcie
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Yorge Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
great image
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