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September 23, 2011
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NIKON D700
10/1600 second
F/2.8
85 mm
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Sep 23, 2011, 4:13:16 PM
Adobe Photoshop CS2 Windows
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:iconclefairykid:
This is a lovely photo, there are a number of things I like about this that make it work in a unique way.

Firstly, the eyes grab you from the start, it's a stare that demands your attention and almost questions you. The makeup used also enhances this stare, and it really becomes the focal point for the piece.

Secondly is the hair, it's wonderfully striking, but maybe struggles to suit the otherwise pink and pastel piece. It's nice in contrast with those staring eyes though, and so tends to work somewhat well with the piece. I prefer a fluffier kind of hair style usually, but that is a part of your artistic choice here and perhaps lends more attention to those all important eyes that might not remain the focal point if a crazy hair style was used.

Lastly, I love square compositions, and the way that the shadow sits behind the model and light colour scheme really add to it in an almost vintage kind of way. I don't think I like the nose ring much here, I'm usually not too fussed about facial piercings but here the ring seems too big and takes away from the focus on the brilliantly pink lips that so perfectly suit the skin and pale pink top.

This is all a matter of personal taste though and don't let it discourage you, I've just tried to look at how the image flows for me as a viewer and you may find others who see it differently.
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:iconevierose:
you are soooooo amazing
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:iconkuroneko-blkcat:
mysterious and elegant
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!Penumbra-Lycan Dec 8, 2011   General Artist
very pretty!
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Mood: Love *mrmd53 Nov 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Love it..
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~PotentialMistakes Nov 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Omg, I just LOVE your eyes!
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~ASM-studio Oct 27, 2011  Professional Artisan Crafter
wow :love:
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*N74 Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
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~TheNeoShaman Oct 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
your hair color is just perfect for your angel's face
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~seedz Oct 12, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
awesome
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=Flyy1 Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Love the expression.
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