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February 19, 2012
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Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D700
Shutter Speed
10/2500 second
Aperture
F/9.0
Focal Length
85 mm
Date Taken
Feb 17, 2012, 3:21:12 PM
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS2 Windows
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Well done. Brings much emotion out and speaks volumes. Imperfectly perfect in many ways. By far a favorite of mine. I really enjoy the hair strands going across the face. It adds a certain artistic value to the shot and gives it a paint feel. I really enjoy the grainy feeling and the contrast. Personally, the only thing that I take issue with is at the top of the head, the little bump of hair. I would have cleaned it up a little bit to give it a little more flow over the top of the head. All in all, it is a wonderful picture and you should be quite proud of it. Thanks for sharing :)
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I really like the grain in the white parts. The total black background really makes you stand out. If the black background contained a grain the effect wouldn't be as good.

The modest but brilliant composition of this picture makes it beautiful in its simplicity. Less is more and less is beautiful. One more thing about minimalism, it only works when you have something non-minimalistic to compare it to and since your gallery have a wide range of different selfportaits and photos this one really stands out.

The only thing I could possibly miss about this picture is a concept, poem or something that would give it an other dimension. The title makes me think about sleep (rapid eye movement) and dreams but something more would really make this a piece of art. Your photos stands on the brink of amazing but try to give your photos a greater meaning than just "you can like my photography on facebook" You have an amazing face and are a talented photographer, I would love to see a little more concept and vision to your art. Like "The cold from the still warm body". That one has a poetic title and its one of your best. It has that third dimension that really takes it to a whole new level [link]

BTW, If this was a vinyl record I would so buy it.
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Blossom-Lullabies Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013   Photographer
You have been added in an Human and Feelings feature [link] Thank you for your breathtaking work full of sensations :hug:
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lilelle Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012
like the black and white contrast.
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miss-blondie Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
wiadomo, że wszystkie Twoje zdjęcia są zajebiste, ale to mój zdecydowany faworyt :love:
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TheNormal1 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012   General Artist
Love the feel of this one
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xVynnx Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012
Wonderful use of B&W. This is simply amazing.

Though it possibly has a little too much head room.
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emptymemories321 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
featured here : [link] :)


have a nice day :squee:
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Plasticwalrus93 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012
Did you get the title from Michael Stipes group?
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Kaz-D Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Hello!
You've been featured in Photography Weekly Edition Fourteen
Please favourite it if you enjoyed it!
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Stormchained Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
is she really as white or was it just tweaked brightness?
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Ethelanite Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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ZENIBYFAJNIE, Y U NO MARRY ME?
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