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:iconabbles56:
Beautiful. The composition is great. I really like the red and orange hue of the whole photo. Your eyes are beautiful, they contrast well with the paleness of your skin and spectrum of red and orange you included in this. The focus is great, the way you positioned your hands is also great, everything is composed nicely. However, this lacks originality. This is a beautiful photo, no doubt about it, composition is wonderful, but so many people have done a photo just like this. Everything else about it is great. Your technique is wonderful, everything is in focus and nothing looks out of place. Although there are many like it, this one stands out against the others because of your edginess, with bright red lips against pale skin and a nose piercing, the colors really stand out well, and, hate to beat a dead horse, but the composition is lovely. Nice work!
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:iconxidis777:
holy mother of mothers mother!! There is so much to this piece where to start?

First i would like to discus the individual eye. emotionless and cold, so cold that you want to know why. Why is she so cold? Instantly drawing you into her story.

Red is a color of passion, sensitivity, and hate. the clearly defined lips and nails fill the veiwer with lust and fear. They want her but are afraid that she will be to much to handle.

Hair can set a ton on its own, amber orange hair is alive. covering a chunk of her face keeping it a secret, killing the viewer with curiousity to know who she is.

wow, and some wow, great job!!!!!
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:icongrotesquelucienne:
wow, great shot! The colours are beautiful :)




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great colours

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my new background on my leptop!! :D
amazing!

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dude! i love this.. can u just quickly name the techniques u used... yar believe i can do eeet..i just dont know where to being/begin ;) :dance:

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:iconn74:
WoW Wonderful shot!
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always perfect.......
:iconsenisga:
wow!!!

PERFECT!!

LOVELY!!

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