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I would like the sky...

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Image size
1744x2080px 1.46 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D700
Shutter Speed
10/1600 second
Aperture
F/4.5
Focal Length
70 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Aug 6, 2010, 7:49:52 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This is just a beautiful, beautiful photograph; especially for being spontaneous. The colors go together perfectly, and the model's red hair makes it pop. And the composition is just perfect.

There are only two reasons I rated it 4 stars in technique: the tube-looking thing at the left edge of the picture, which kind of clutters the image (the best way to remedy this would be to crop the picture a teeny, tiny bit more, and if you have to, paint over it with the same color as the sky and the water.
Secondly, the halo surrounding her seems kind of unnatural. If that happened naturally, than it's no problem; but maybe you can go back and edit it again so it blends in with the background a bit more. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Overall, I really enjoyed this picture, and I hope you liked my critique! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/>