Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
Angelene by zenibyfajnie Angelene by zenibyfajnie
You can like my photography on facebook: [link]

t u m b l r [link]

b l o g s p o t [link]
Add a Comment:
 
:icondonnymurph:
This photo is proof that the simplest compositions are the most powerful. It is the most impressive and memorable composition I have seen from you for a while. I love artworks where the subject fills most of the frame, with nothing to distract the viewer from the emotion in your face. Looking just slightly away from the camera helps to make the shot seem more candid, and it makes me feel like I am viewing something very intimate and personal.

The focusing here is very good. You don't always get the focus right, but you definitely have in this one. There is impressive detail in your face and the strands of hair hanging in front of your eye. My view is drawn immediately to these areas instead of hunting around the image looking for something to focus on.

However, the shadows are very grainy, much more than they should be at ISO 100. I think this is partly because you used the 5DII instead of the D700. I have heard that the 5DII is quite noisy in low light. You could have applied selective noise reduction to the shaded areas and I think the photo would be much more impressive if you did.

On the other hand, I think the lighting is brilliant. It adds a lot of texture and depth to the artwork. I know you love to use natural light, and I think this is another way that you have made the image seem very personal. You have also done an excellent job with the exposure, capturing all of the subtle tones of your skin with great detail.

Overall, I find this piece to be very sexy and moody, and simply love looking at it.
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
20 out of 20 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconlolster11:
Okay.
I see the atmosphere of the picture you were going for and you definitely succeeded in the Grunge/punk type look.
I also recognize the bold shadow use in this picture and the slight blur effect added to it. This adds intensity and makes the main focus stand out.
Very good technique.

I only see one flaw in this picture though.
The diverted and lack of soul in the eye of the person.
She seems to be in space or something.
This takes some of the boldness away from the picture
but other than that it is very excellent.
I would give this a 4/5 stars altogether.
Nice Job!
I look forward to seeing more of this work from you!
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
17 out of 19 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconguardianofmemories:
GuardianofMemories Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
She looks like Rihanna :) Sort of.
Reply
:iconzzvonschnerk:
zzvonschnerk Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
A favourite ! Smiling is overrated.

Some 70's GARAGE ROCK - PLAY LOUD:

MC5 - Looking At You (1970) Album: The Fabulous RACHEL MOORE Album - Various *****

STOOGES (IGGY POP) - I Got A Right (1969) Album: The Fabulous RACHEL MOORE Album - Various *****

STOOGES (IGGY POP) - I'm Sick Of You (1969) Album: Nude & Rude - The Best Of IGGY *****

STOOGES (IGGY POP) - Gimme Danger (1969) Album: Nude & Rude - The Best Of IGGY *****

...everything else of the 60's & 70's stuff of the STOOGES !!!

> all for FREE at spotify.com <

All the best from BERLIN... INGO

By the way - I'm a lovesick wreck - because of a GIRL (goddess) from POLAND...
Reply
:icontheabra:
theAbRA Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
& I'm Burnin, I'm Burnin, I'm Burnin for You!! (BOC)
Reply
:iconanthadeva:
Anthadeva Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Reply
:iconcountsthestars:
countsthestars Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
ah, i would favorite this a million times.
Reply
:iconjewelsmarie:
JewelsMarie Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Professional General Artist
STRIKING!!
Reply
:iconvoluminous2:
voluminous2 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Professional General Artist
"Multipass!"

Love how the hand in shadow appears to be connected to your actual arm. Great shots, you have been favorited...
Reply
:iconthermxson:
thermxson Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012
greeeen eye
Reply
:icone1969r:
E1969R Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow! This is just awesome! :heart: :heart: :heart:
Reply
:iconmoniqueadele5:
MoniqueAdele5 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
Love this! Its so good :D
Reply
:iconnarcissistictoy:
NarcissisticToy Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
Kurwa, jesteś prześliczna :c
Reply
:iconsteffi-de-luxe:
steffi-de-luxe Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
WOW
Reply
:iconsonichiko:
Sonichiko Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
There are moment when beauty in a serene woman dwells one who is often unforgettable, and you dear lady are one woman who shall be unforgettable.

Please thank your team involve with your photo shoots. Be well and dwell ever beautiful in that what you love to do.
Reply
:iconmerosmanos:
MerosManos Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
those eyes... amaizing!
Reply
:iconstacey-woo-x:
stacey-woo-x Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
#1 rule of portraits... FOCUS ON THE EYE.
Reply
:iconivonatheman:
IvonaTheMan Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Piercing <3
Reply
:iconmedicinegirlash8:
MedicinegirlAsh8 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's like a female version of Gerard Way ha ha
Reply
:iconbliksim:
Bliksim Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
I love this , your neck line bright hair and lips .........but that #$@& you look in your eye makes it. well #$@&ing done.
Reply
:iconatte-1:
aTTe-1 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Student Photographer
so much attitude!
Reply
:icondropnox:
dropnox Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wonderful :3
Reply
:iconlileath:
Lileath Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Student Artist
"My first name Angelene, prettiest mess you've ever seen" : )
Reply
:iconamaestro:
amaestro Featured By Owner May 24, 2012
i like noises on breast and light on neck and hair.. great
Reply
:iconzwitter-666:
Zwitter-666 Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
Enjoy
Reply
:iconschwarzerblitz:
schwarzerBlitz Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love you T_T
Reply
:iconsrp1998:
SRP1998 Featured By Owner May 22, 2012
LOVE IT!!!
Reply
:iconcincosemanas:
cincosemanas Featured By Owner May 22, 2012
this is stunning- instant fave!
Reply
:iconantikavelvet:
AntikaVelvet Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so unbelievable gorgeous. I want this to hang in my house and just stare at it. Such a perfect picture!
Reply
:iconbroadwaygal93:
broadwaygal93 Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Student Photographer
i have to ask.. is this model you or is it a relative or something? I love her look !!
Reply
:icondonnymurph:
donnymurph Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It's her. Look at the category, it says self-portraits.
Reply
:iconbroadwaygal93:
broadwaygal93 Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Student Photographer
oh DUH!!! thanks :)
Reply
:icondonnymurph:
donnymurph Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:lol::lmao:
Reply
:iconhelmetz0r:
Helmetz0r Featured By Owner May 18, 2012
it's nice.
Reply
:iconvisionbreak:
visionbreak Featured By Owner May 17, 2012   Photographer
this picture - the look - is really cooooool
Reply
:iconvscoart:
VscoArt Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really love your hair colour <3 It's pretty amazing! great composition by the ways (:
Reply
:iconkeliyaaphotography:
KeliyaaPhotography Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Student Photographer
Mother of god.. :love:
Reply
:iconreokasileny:
ReokaSileny Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Reminds me of Rihanna, but prettier...lol
Reply
:iconmrpozeroff:
MrPozeroff Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
A nice girl a nice name for a nice photo !
Reply
:iconidzprecz:
idzprecz Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
one of the best
Reply
:iconricktw:
Ricktw Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
well superb... Makes speechless, really.
Reply
:iconfrawnix:
Frawnix Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
You look like a white rihanna! Cool.
Reply
:iconblack-velvet-lady:
Black-Velvet-Lady Featured By Owner May 17, 2012   Photographer
it doesn't seem real hair! great =)
Reply
:iconbjakuran:
Bjakuran Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
will u go out with me?
Reply
:iconluciloverock:
LuciLoveRock Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're awesome , seriously.
Reply
:iconmarciarzyna:
marciarzyna Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
prze!!
Reply
:iconjavercis:
javercis Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
love it..
Color,
light,
emotion
Reply
:iconwild2:
wild2 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
you are so beauty that i can't look in this amazing photo, i'm jealous :DD
Reply
:iconlifexgoesxon:
lifexgoesxon Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
love it.
Reply
:iconmontenero:
Montenero Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG, Rihanna in... less ugly :D
Reply
:iconstarprint:
Starprint Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Stunning. I particularly like the shadow/light contrast.
Reply
:iconsilverface2:
Silverface2 Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
Nice Nice Nice
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×
Download JPG 1566 × 1072




Details

Submitted on
May 16, 2012
Image Size
1.2 MB
Resolution
1566×1072
Submitted with
Sta.sh
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
41,940 (1 today)
Favourites
2,545 (who?)
Comments
105
Downloads
1,582

Camera Data

Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Shutter Speed
1/664 second
Aperture
F/5.0
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
May 16, 2012, 6:21:20 PM
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS2 Windows
Sensor Size
10mm
×