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Submitted: December 8, 2011
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Make:NIKON CORPORATION
Model:NIKON D700
Shutter Speed:10/2500 second
Aperture:F/4.5
Focal Length:85 mm
Date Taken:Dec 7, 2011, 5:20:33 PM
Software:Adobe Photoshop CS2 Windows

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Critique by ~billyink Mar 25, 2012, 10:07:34 PM

You take lovely photos, very sexy and such. Just speaking from my person aesthetic tastes I feel that it would be interesting to see a little less blatantly sexy in a photo. You have a lovely body but the combination of the very revealing top with the equally minimal bottom is a little redundant. It doesn't create dynamic lines in the image and it doesn't challenge the viewer, if that makes sense. One example that I often cite with this is the reason that oh so many outfits involving small, tight tops and small, tight skirts do not work. They generally fail to create long lines and guide the viewer's eye throughout the body. Effectively, we get stuck on your breasts and thighs, which however enjoyable is too simple. I would really endeavor to create some images that we have not all 'seen before'. I'm not being overly articulate about my point here, but essentially I feel that many of your photos (self-portraits specifically) lack ambition, and lack artistic exploration. Sexy is not all there is to life, essentially, and you are aesthetically pleasing in ways that do not necessarily pertain to sex. Again, excellent photo none the less, keep it up, and I would love to see you explore some new territory in your self portraits.

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