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December 8, 2011
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NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D700
Shutter Speed
10/2500 second
Aperture
F/4.5
Focal Length
85 mm
Date Taken
Dec 7, 2011, 5:20:33 PM
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS2 Windows
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:iconbillyink:
You take lovely photos, very sexy and such. Just speaking from my person aesthetic tastes I feel that it would be interesting to see a little less blatantly sexy in a photo. You have a lovely body but the combination of the very revealing top with the equally minimal bottom is a little redundant. It doesn't create dynamic lines in the image and it doesn't challenge the viewer, if that makes sense. One example that I often cite with this is the reason that oh so many outfits involving small, tight tops and small, tight skirts do not work. They generally fail to create long lines and guide the viewer's eye throughout the body. Effectively, we get stuck on your breasts and thighs, which however enjoyable is too simple. I would really endeavor to create some images that we have not all 'seen before'. I'm not being overly articulate about my point here, but essentially I feel that many of your photos (self-portraits specifically) lack ambition, and lack artistic exploration. Sexy is not all there is to life, essentially, and you are aesthetically pleasing in ways that do not necessarily pertain to sex. Again, excellent photo none the less, keep it up, and I would love to see you explore some new territory in your self portraits.
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:iconandrew-chemerys:
andrew-chemerys Mar 31, 2012  Professional Photographer
Perfect model!
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:iconjetfalcoreturns:
JetFalcoReturns Mar 24, 2012
Sexy as hell ;)
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:icon1348249:
this is hot!
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:icontaki1:
Prawe spoko, lewe - wybrałbym inne tło. Odrosty do wyfotoszopowania, ale to już mój osobisty pedantyzm.
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:iconzargeastock:
zargeastock Feb 13, 2012  Professional Filmographer
beautiful
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:iconsecesja:
secesja Jan 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
jezusiemaryjo CO ZA BUTY tak z ciekawosco... ile za takie trzeba dać? :D
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:iconroycastle:
the eyes the eyes, the beautiful eyes!
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:iconnocturnalstigma:
NocturnalStigma Dec 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
that sort of smile on the right square fits you really fine!
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:icongwenlectra:
gwenlectra Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
waiiit i like this one ^_^ <3
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:iconmystikrhythmz:
mystikrhythmz Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:heart:
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